If you wanna spoil your day
And if you think that is cool,
When the sun goes down
You might be a fool.
For when you look back to smile,
You might see just a pile.
Then don't be sad,
For your day is done,
And your eternity is not plain
For me to explain.
But if you're wise
And turn back now,
You shall see
A cross so nice.
And if you think that is cool,
When the sun goes down
You might be a fool.
For when you look back to smile,
You might see just a pile.
Then don't be sad,
For your day is done,
And your eternity is not plain
For me to explain.
But if you're wise
And turn back now,
You shall see
A cross so nice.
loved it..but don't u think that in the 2nd last para is should be 'you are' or 'you're' instead of "your"??? just a doubt..but otherwise its really amazing..hats off brotthherrr...:)
ReplyDeletethank you sis
ReplyDeletei did correct the mistake :-)
yup wonderful one. yea hope all turn to see wat the Cross holds for each one. How much He loved us and how much He yearns for us to turn to Him for His love and grace!!
ReplyDeleteyeah chachi.....i wish all did .....
ReplyDeleteHIS grace keeps us going :-)
Good job!! Keep it up!! God Bless :)
ReplyDeletekeep up d spirit.....wish kids wud be able to come across ur poems too in future!!!!!!!!!....................
ReplyDeletewonderful poem bro - this is certainly a gist of what what life can be!!Good work!!
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