O’ thou daughter of lucifer,
Striking like some Juniper.
Thou art a beauty
Bound by thy duty.
She is lovely as a rose,
Lonely as some prose.
She can be soft as a petal,
But she is strong as a metal.
She is never too late,
Never comes for a date.
Some choose to go to her,
Others let her come.
She knows no sleep,
And takes no leap.
She is a beauty,
You wouldn’t miss.
Someone with whom
You might mess.
But with her glare
She’ll bring even the best,
Out of their nest,
Because she has the flair.
She is not just a bisexual,
Cause I saw her with an animal.
Her eyes are so bright,
They can give you a fright.
When she comes on her time,
Not a word she will say,
But with your life you will pay.
She can bring down the sun
Believe me when I say
She is no fun.
Some call thee death,
But thou art a liberator,
Cause thou canst take me
To THE LOVE I love.
hey i dnt agree dat she isnt fun..she might be..for da ppl who go to her she is definitely fun..neway i think it is well written..dint knw ud write on them..came to me as a shock..i had to chek ur name agn..:) bravo bro..
ReplyDeletethank a lot sis....
ReplyDeletecan be said in that way too sis...but then i thought how death can be fun cause no-one knows what comes after death to them.....
Rejoe... nitya still hasn't understood the volta of your poem! she still thinks you have written about a prostitute! :) what twist man! And the las t two lines of your first stanza? amazing!!!
ReplyDeleteoh damn man..nw i get it..shit i shud hv read a second time..:P stupid me..but even then think about dis..wat abt old ppl??? like really old people..they dnt want da pain nemr...dont wna live anymr..for them if death comes earlier it'll be fun..neway wat u said is mre apt..
ReplyDeletebro.... this is sum realy cool stuff.... i liked teh tittle, and pls stop calling her sis, we all know she is ur sis and we trust u on tht man..... how long u took to write this poem?
ReplyDeleterejoe...this poem's a beauty!!=)read it twice to get it into ma head!:P...cool stuff!!
ReplyDelete@nitya.... wont call u sis again :-) ....
ReplyDeletedeath opens to us a door to a place we have not known ...so its a liberator because it is freeing us from this world...but cant be said fun because even if u choose to go to her, she may liberate u from this world to a worse place...you can never know. so the mystery part of it reduces the fun or in better words should reduce the fun.
@aghil... yeah i stopped calling her sis:-)
it took around 2 weeks i guess
thank GOD it turned out well....
@ blessy ...thank you...:-)